1.
Beating and pumping life
through tiny veins.
The organ we hope
never fails us.
2.
The artwork on history notes.
Big, small and in clusters,
adds life to dull note paper.
3.
Red and pink paper cut outs
given out on every
February fourteenth
as a small gesture of friendship
and affection.
Always paired with those three words;
Be My Valentine
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i really like the perspectives you choose. in the second stanza i'd pick another word besides 'doodles'. it sort of stands out - not in the good way. i'd replace it with notes, then eliminate 'notes' after history and replace that with 'history class.' oh, and put 'the' between on and corners. haha.
love it! it makes me smile. :]]
i agree i loved it, speciall they second stanza, it's so cute, i dont know 'doodles' is a cute word but i do agree, it can stand out, maybe use a different word like sketch or something. overall i liked the poem, and you did'nt make it chliche with love and all that other stuff that comes with vanentines and love. =] good job
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