1.
The morning struggle's victory
from racing time
with an open coffee cup in hand.
2.
Careless colors,
expressions on a canvas,
forgetting about long sleeves.
3.
Ketchup getting its revenge
for when you pounded
on its stubborn bottom.
4.
A three year old
wanting to help during a meal.
"I'll pour!"
5.
Green knees
skinned with pride,
memories of
blocking that last goal during over- time.
6.
A reminder of how
dependant a sweater's life is
on how close you are to the noodles,
when dealing with tomato sauce.
7.
Unexpected,
unwanted
keepsakes reminding us
no one is perfect.
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AMANDA! this poem rules
first ist he worst secondist the best
okay, now that i beat chloe.....I love this poem!
Omg I love the idea of this. I love the ketchup one, it made me laugh.
But the ending..the ending! So good! I think I would clarify stanza six a little more. Maybe change the phrase "when dealing with" but I can offer no other help besdies that as I see it is not needed! BRAVO!
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