Friday, November 16, 2007

Magnetic Poetry

So, a few days ago Laura, Christine and I got together to make magnetic poetry. We had many interesting words, and decided to go with the subject of love/ relationships.


Embraced Deception

Break up's process :
Late night, love-hate relationships.
Heart tattered feelings,
And memries which feel empty now.
The thoughts spit desire
companionship,
and sensational passion through
discomforting green eyes.
Like hopeless lying flowers under black honesty.

2 comments:

ldanks said...

it sounds much better with the words you added and switched around.

Chibi Kitsune said...

"Like hopeless lying flowers under black honesty."

Very nice. ^-^